...One...Redone by zackm17
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Description
With my first reder done, I figured, will all the things I learned doing it, I would redo it and add somethings that were missing before.
poser, bryce, PS
Hair by Kazaburo
thanks for viewing, and please do comment its the only way that I will learn and get better
Comments (8)
marcfx
What a great start, lighting is excellent, props all work with the model and composition is top class too, one little point i would make is, the models bottom is not on the ground in my view, a little lower and this will be an excellent piece of artwork.........but hey! i'm no expert!
mmirnii
setting is great i like it a lot. simple and creative.
Blade9
The logo is cool, only you can'y really see the shadow...
Razorcut
You did a wonderful job with the new shadow. I quess she is alittle above ground as marcfx noticed. But everything else looks very good!
Doublecrash
It's a big improvement from your first posting! Now it has more depth, and those lightrays (beautiful) have a deeper meaning. You maybe have to check her position (if you work in Bryce, use the orthogonal views and zoom in until you're sure she's not floating). A big, big improvement.
olitoth
This version is better ! Great light-effect ! Well done.
alvinylaya
Wow you really gave it some umph! I really thought it was beautiful to begin with. I'm really glad you reposted it. Now there's more visibility. Congrats on a great improvement.
dandavis
Lights look nice. There is some kinking around the elbows and hips. The pose could use a little work but don't take that the wrong way. I like it very much! :-)