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The Darkness of the Daylight

Writers Atmosphere/Mood posted on Feb 01, 2005
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The Darkness of the Daylight by David Levins [midrael] I remember standing, eyes full of tears As I watched her leave my side. My mind and heart succumbed to fears That deep in my soul now reside. She walked away, never looking back Keeping her eyes from meeting my own, And as she left, I felt my heart crack From the seeds of pain that had been sown. I cry out as she leaves my sight My heart turning to stone solidly hewn, And since that morning's dawning light My dreams remain barren endless dunes. I do not know if she will ever return To grace the dreamland of the night, But for her presence my soul now burns, And without her, darkness fills the daylight.

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KimberlyC

11:39PM | Tue, 01 February 2005

Wow!.. very sad feelings.. Excellent as always! :P

Pen_Is_Envy

12:43AM | Wed, 02 February 2005

This is wonderful, David, it's almost as though she is a ghost to him. Beautifully told. :)

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dido6

8:34AM | Wed, 02 February 2005

As always you have a way with words. Very nice my friend!!

atom80

12:16PM | Wed, 02 February 2005

Excellent , yet sad tale. Nice written as always. Who needs her anyways? ;)

tony_br22

7:30PM | Wed, 02 February 2005

awesome text !

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FireTemptress

12:39AM | Thu, 28 April 2005

Watching her walk away, but letting her do so... What an incredible way with words.... my heart ached, and felt this one deep.


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